Final Project

My topic is about ‘The Royal Crisis of Prince Harry and Meghan Markle’.
Basically it is about why did prince harry dropped his royal titles and stepped down from the royal family. So the argument is about if prince harry dropped his royal titles due to some background racism from his family and culture differences and those lead him to step down from the royal family and live his life with his wife Meghan without any family interaction.

Professors Comment on the file I uploaded :
The more important issue is that there is still no clear ARGUMENT here – there is a lot of information about the couple and some about the Royal Family in general, but it is not heading in a clear or specific direction and so seems rather random and disjointed. The most important thing for you to do now is to get your argument, in the form of a thesis statement, clearly and fully written, so that you can use it to help guide you through the different parts of your paper to build an argument that is logical and coherent.  I strongly urge you take your draft and my comments to an appointment with the Writing Center because as written you will not produce a successful essay. Once you have spoken with the WC, we can have a meeting to talk about your essay.  But you need to get this major problem resolved asap.