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      IB English A HL essay

    I started the essay, only doing the introduction, and there were some points that the teacher had:
    -your introduction does miss one part: the hook. The hook should actually introduce your subject matter/topic
    -You should add a line of inquiry before your thesis statement. What question does this essay raise? and see how you can internalize identity under feminism

    1300-1500 words
    no plagiarism

    I uploaded the document where I started the essay, the names of the paintings are in the document; you can search them up

    rubric:
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